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Post by Blackheart on Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:45 am

Caelum Prognatus is a story that I wrote a few years ago in a college Philosophy class. It was around thirty pages, and submitted for the final project in that class. Recently, while perusing old school files, I found the old Word document that I had saved the story in, and decided that I should share it with everyone. It is divided into several chapters, and I thought that I would post each chapter intermittently though out the week. If you guys like what you read, let me know here in this thread. It received an A in the class, so I know that it at least has some positive merit. I had thought about getting it published, but it is too short to be its own publication, and I don't know of any magazines or digests that I could submit it to. If you guys think it is publish-worthy and have any ideas, let me know. Thanks! and enjoy the story!

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Post by Blackheart on Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:12 am

I decided to start out with a two-fer. Chapters one and two are both up and ready for viewing. Very Happy

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Post by Bayomir on Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:05 pm

Nicely written. Can't wait to see where this story goes. :kudos:

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Post by Blackheart on Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:31 am

Part three is up.

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Post by Bayomir on Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:21 pm

Nicely done. The dream was pretty intense.

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Post by Blackheart on Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:21 pm

I posted up two more chapters. Part 4 is pretty small, so I decided to make it another two-fer..

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Post by Bayomir on Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:51 pm

cool.

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Post by Bayomir on Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:02 pm

Awesome bit of literary excellence! good job! I figured the ending out though...but that's because it's me, and I know you, and we can figure each other out.

Hence why we make such a great team...

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Post by Blackheart on Fri Mar 07, 2008 5:27 am

I went ahead and posted the final chapter of Act One. I figured I'd get it up since I probably won't get around to posting any more tomorrow..

Bon appetit!

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Post by Bayomir on Fri Mar 07, 2008 3:41 pm

Very interesting ending to that act. Awesome story so far, Nick.

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Post by Blackheart on Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:36 pm

The first part of Act Two is now up...

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Post by Bayomir on Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:02 pm

Nice addition. I like the Old Mariner.

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Post by Blackheart on Thu Mar 13, 2008 8:04 pm

Just posted up chapters 8 and 9, since I hadn't been able to post any more lately. i should be able to post more regularly from here on out.. the winter quarter is almost over!!!

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Post by Bayomir on Thu Mar 13, 2008 10:52 pm

Nicely written. Good Job. Interesting that you threw in mermaids though....

Didn't see that coming...

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Post by Blackheart on Sat Mar 15, 2008 12:55 am

Ten is up.

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Post by Blackheart on Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:01 pm

Chapters 11 and 12 are up, wrapping up Act Two. Only one more act to go!

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Post by Blackheart on Wed Mar 19, 2008 5:13 am

Chapters 13 and 14 are now up. Only 5 chapters left.

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Post by Bayomir on Wed Mar 19, 2008 4:20 pm

JEEZ! I've been outta the loop here!!!!

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Post by Blackheart on Sun Mar 30, 2008 9:01 pm

I went ahead and posted up the final five chapters of the story... I hadn't had a chance to post any this past week, so I thought I'd rather not drag it out any more and just get it all out there. Let me know what you think!

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Post by Bayomir on Tue Apr 01, 2008 6:52 pm

Deal. I'll read it and let you know, bro.

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