Caelum Prognatus - Comments

Caelum Prognatus is a story that I wrote a few years ago in a college Philosophy class. It was around thirty pages, and submitted for the final project in that class. Recently, while perusing old school files, I found the old Word document that I had saved the story in, and decided that I should share it with everyone. It is divided into several chapters, and I thought that I would post each chapter intermittently though out the week. If you guys like what you read, let me know here in this thread. It received an A in the class, so I know that it at least has some positive merit. I had thought about getting it published, but it is too short to be its own publication, and I don't know of any magazines or digests that I could submit it to. If you guys think it is publish-worthy and have any ideas, let me know. Thanks! and enjoy the story!

I decided to start out with a two-fer. Chapters one and two are both up and ready for viewing.

Nicely written. Can't wait to see where this story goes. :kudos:

Part three is up.

Nicely done. The dream was pretty intense.

I posted up two more chapters. Part 4 is pretty small, so I decided to make it another two-fer..

cool.

Awesome bit of literary excellence! good job! I figured the ending out though...but that's because it's me, and I know you, and we can figure each other out.

Hence why we make such a great team...

I went ahead and posted the final chapter of Act One. I figured I'd get it up since I probably won't get around to posting any more tomorrow..

Bon appetit!

Very interesting ending to that act. Awesome story so far, Nick.

The first part of Act Two is now up...

Nice addition. I like the Old Mariner.

Just posted up chapters 8 and 9, since I hadn't been able to post any more lately. i should be able to post more regularly from here on out.. the winter quarter is almost over!!!

Nicely written. Good Job. Interesting that you threw in mermaids though....

Didn't see that coming...

Ten is up.

Chapters 11 and 12 are up, wrapping up Act Two. Only one more act to go!

Chapters 13 and 14 are now up. Only 5 chapters left.

JEEZ! I've been outta the loop here!!!!

I went ahead and posted up the final five chapters of the story... I hadn't had a chance to post any this past week, so I thought I'd rather not drag it out any more and just get it all out there. Let me know what you think!

Deal. I'll read it and let you know, bro.